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Friday 2 July 2021

trip to minigolf

this is us at mini golf it was a sunny day we were doing a                                                                                   challenge. if we win the challenge we could pick what ever we wanted to eat for all of us THE END


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  1. Ariana5 July 2021 at 13:41

    Kia Ora Kisina
    Wow it looks like you guys had a lot of fun
    I really like the way you added a picture onto your writing piece.
    Maybe next time you could add a bit more writing onto your post.
    Also check your spelling before you post.
    Overall good job

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  2. Isabella 29 July 2021 at 09:44

    Kia Ora Kisina,
    I like how you included a photo in the post.
    Maybe next time you could check your capitals before you post.
    This reminded me of when I went to mini golf with my mum.
    Who won the game, and what did they pick for your food?
    Good job- Isabella

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  3. Anonymous30 July 2021 at 10:02

    Kia Ora Kisina I love how you included a photo in your post.
    It seemed liked you enjoyed yourself very much at mini golf, maybe next you do another blog post make sure you have capital letters and full stops. Question- Who won the mini golf game?
    Nga mihi tino pai-Capri

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